"The Creative Process of Writing
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November, 2009
In This Issue:
1. Preview
2. Publisher's Note
3. The Good Soldiers
4. Helpful Hints
1. Preview
The Writer's Connection explores the creative process
of writing and the interplay between thoughts, feelings,
and actions. We are an interactive community of authors
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skills, and experiences in writing fiction in any genre,
but our emphasis remains mystery and suspense thrillers.
Published monthly, the Newsletter offers writing tips
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information.
Topics are presented from the perspective of Keith Barton
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2. Publisher's Note
November, 2009
Dear Writer's Connection Subscriber,
This month's newsletter features:
The Good Soldiers
3. The Good Soldiers
What Walter Cronkite was to WWII, David Finkel is to the Iraqi War. He is a journalist
who followed the Second Battalion, 16th Infantry Division during the 2007-08 Surge in
the village of Kamaliyah, near Baghdad. Nicknamed, The Rangers, the 300 men under the
command of Colonel Kauzlarich (Col. K), endured 15 months of 115 degree temperature in
their armored vehicles that ended in 14 battalion deaths and numerous more wounded minus
limbs who later were sent stateside for rehabilitation at Walter Reed. The dreaded enemy,
like Vietnam; was invisible: it could be a woman holding a baby, a young woman strapped
with explosives under her black tunic, an old man pulling on a string that sends ten
thousand nails into a Humvee pulverizing limbs in a fireball that burned soldiers beyond
recognition.
The book is quite graphic in the depiction of close-arms, door-to-door search and destroy
tactics. Platoons of eight soldiers are dispersed into COPS, who fight sleep, depression,
and PTSD, to find the Taliban who cowardly set off IEDs (Intermittent Explosive Devices)
and EFPs that kill, cripple, and maim U.S. nineteen and twenty-year old soldiers just out
of high school. Joshua Atchley was the one who lost an eye; he later recovered at
BAMC and had four fake eyes, his favorite one with the crosshairs of a sniper scope.
Others lost arms, legs, ears, and other anatomical body parts who will forever
be reminded of a war that was unwinnable from the start. Each chapter begins with a
quote from President Bush on how we are winning the Surge, only to be reminded that
the soldiers on the ground knew otherwise. Afraid to disagree even privately with the
war, the 2-16 was like other battalions of young soldiers who believe in a cause that
is compromised by social, cultural, and political ideology.
Col. K, the eternal optimist, charged up his troops with "it's all good," reminiscent
of Robert Duvall's famous line, "I love the smell of napalm in the morning," in Coppola's
1979 movie, Apocalypse Now, about the air assault cavalry in Vietnam. Despite Col. K's
steroid talks, his men knew the war was unwinnable, despite decreasing U.S. casualties.
The Good Soldiers suffered mental disorders that the news channels do not report-in a
poignant tale, one soldier kept phoning his wife in the wee hours of U.S. time thinking
she was cheating on him and going berserk because she wouldn't answer her phone. Home
was a place of disaster for many soldiers (Capt. James Tezap of the Combat Stress Unit).
Coming back from leave is the worse part of a deployment because you face two unknowns:
your home town and family you left and the enemy on foreign soil.
In January 2007 when the Surge was announced, 83 American troops died and 647 were wounded
in Iraq. In January 2008, 40 died and 234 were wounded. The Joint Chiefs crunched numbers
reminiscent of the body counts in Vietnam. Despite the fact our President said we were
winning the war, the 2-16 soldiers knew differently. They had only to look at the young
faces of replacements for their buddies lucky enough to return home with missing body parts.
Others went home in body bags. The tragedy of the Iraqi War, as portrayed in Finkel's narrative
is that the enemy was a pull wire that crossed a dirt road: no AK-47 staring the soldier in the
face; no tank blasting a 50 rounder at you; no infantry advancing around your flank; no helicopters
blasting you with cannon fire. Our troops were literally "sitting ducks" on a pond called Kamaliyah.
As the last of the 2-16 were airlifted from 15 months of hell, there was no Mel Gibson ending in the
Hollywood movie, We Were Soldiers. Instead, the 2-16 shouted in unison: "This place; the fucking dust,
the fucking stink, the fucking all of it, this fucking place." As Col. K peered out the helicopter
hatch twenty yards airborne, he closed his eyes. They had won. He was sure of it. They were the difference.
It was all good. But he had seen enough." (page 273).
Helpful Hints:
- Contrast the Vietnam
and Iraqi war from a political, cultural,
and economic view; was one war more winnable
than another and why? Why not?
- Combat journalists have the unique perspective of the soldier in the field as contrasted
with war journalists who take "snapshots" as part of an organized tour of journalists. Can you
think of other biographies told from the journalist's POV? How do these books compare to the
realism found in Finkel's book?
- Even Col. K's view was skewed by his rank, even though he fought beside his men. Is this a
function of his training and education (West Point)? Maturity? Chain of command? What do you
think the differences are between a 38-year old career soldier and nineteen year olds who have
volunteered to fight a war for their country?
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About Keith Barton, Ph.D.
Dr. Barton received his Ph.D. in 1972 from the University
of Texas at Austin and has been a practicing therapist
for over thirty years. He is currently enrolled in MentorCoach
and is accepting new clients.
He has been an adjunct professor at the University of
South Carolina, consultant to Fortune 500 companies in
executive development, founded and managed Texas Community
Living Ventures, Inc., in 1986 for providing group home
services to persons with mental retardation. Keith founded
and has been running a clinical practice in Northwest
Houston since 1990.
He writes part-time with the goal of completing one novel
a year. His desire to coach others derives from his passionate
interest in helping others become attuned to their creative
powers of storytelling.
Dr. Barton has training in coaching, cognitive and family
therapy and health psychology. He has published articles,
made presentations and conducted workshops about:
Anxiety and achievement
Stress management
Self-esteem
Communication skills
Marital/relationship enrichment
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The relationship between psychology and spirituality
